Modern Series Episode 140:
Knock Knock

Plot

Struggling to find a suitable place to live, Bill and several friends are approached by an elderly man who offers to rent them rooms in a decaying mansion. His only rule is that the tower at the heart of the structure is strictly out of bounds. On their first night in the house, however, it becomes clear that something strange is afoot. The wooden floors and panelling creak unnaturally, the trees sway without a breeze, mysterious insects roam the corridors... and, one by one, the roommates start to vanish. Fortunately, the Doctor has come along to help Bill unpack -- and together, they uncover a mystery which stretches back decades.

Production

Mike Bartlett had been a Doctor Who fan during his childhood, and had aspired to write for its twenty-first-century revival from an early stage. However, it wasn't until 2015 that he had firmly established his writing pedigree, having won several Laurence Olivier Awards for his plays, and launched the successful drama Doctor Foster on television. In a September 17th interview, Bartlett made mention of his interest in Doctor Who, and the comment caught the eye of script executive Lindsay Alford whose husband, Brian Minchin, was its executive producer alongside Steven Moffat. Bartlett was quickly invited to pitch for Doctor Who, and though Moffat assumed that he would be unavailable after Doctor Foster was renewed for a second season, he was delighted to learn that Bartlett was nonetheless committed to providing him with a script.

In considering ideas for Doctor Who, Bartlett knew that an often successful approach, frequently employed by Moffat himself, was to present an everyday phenomenon in a sinister light. His thoughts eventually turned to the way older houses -- such as the dilapidated Victorian buildings in which he had lived during his university days -- were perpetually filled with creaking noises. Since the United Kingdom was experiencing a shortage of living accommodations, he imagined an adventure involving a group of people who were brought together by an opportunity to share a spooky old house. This dovetailed nicely with the St Luke's University setting being introduced for Doctor Who's thirty-sixth season, since it meant that the flatmates could include Bill and a cohort of students.

The Landlord was drawn from Mike Bartlett's memories of a man in a suit who had once visited his parents

By March 2016, Bartlett's story was called Knock Knock; “The Haunted Hub” would later be erroneously cited as a working title. The wooden Eliza was inspired by The Sandalwood Girl, the second volume of Sheila K McCullagh's Puddle Lane series of books for young readers, first published in 1985. The Landlord was drawn from Bartlett's memories of a man in a suit who had once visited his parents. The historical element of the mystery was suggested by the American paranormal programme The X-Files, in which the lead characters often investigated strange events which had been occurring for many years.

Initial drafts of the script featured an elderly widow called Mrs Lumb, who was acting as Bill's guardian. She was later replaced with Moira, whom Moffat had developed for the season premiere, The Pilot. At this stage, Eliza was indeed the Landlord's daughter, having fallen ill at the age of five. The Landlord's lifespan was being extended by the Dryads, who kept him in a partially human state so that he could recruit new victims when required. After Eliza decided to end her life, all of the people who had been consumed by the Dryads over the years emerged from the walls; those who hailed from earlier decades were returned home by the Doctor.

Originally, Harry was revealed to be the grandson of Harry Sullivan, who had accompanied Tom Baker's Fourth Doctor during 1975. Portrayed by the late Ian Marter, the character was a particular favourite of Bartlett's, but concern was expressed that he was too obscure for a general audience to appreciate the reference. It was then thought that Harry would instead be an ancestor of one of the characters in the season's second episode, Smile; it would be implied that his experience with the Dryads had inspired an interest in nanobot technology, of the sort which would feature prominently in the earlier episode. This notion, too, was eventually abandoned.

Knock Knock was always intended to be made as part of the season's second recording block alongside episode three, Thin Ice. At an early stage, however, it was planned to be broadcast sixth; only around mid-June was it moved up the running order to become the year's fourth installment. An additional consideration for director Bill Anderson would be the use of binaural sound recording technology. Minchin had been keen to experiment with the format, which attempted to evoke a three-dimensional acoustical experience for playback via headphones, and he felt that Bartlett's use of sound to build a spooky atmosphere made Knock Knock a suitable candidate. Binaural sound would not be available during the episode's broadcast, but would be an option for viewers streaming the story via the BBC's iPlayer service.



With Anderson initially focussing on Thin Ice, the only filming for Knock Knock during the early part of Block Two occurred on August 3rd. It saw the sequences in the TARDIS and in Bill's room recorded at Roath Lock Studios in Cardiff. Here Jennifer Hennessy reprised the role of Moira she had originated in The Pilot, but her material -- in which she advised Bill that she had already rented out her bedroom -- was dropped in editing.

Two locations were used to represent most areas of the house at 11 Cardinal Road. The first was Fields House in Newport, where Anderson recorded scenes on the grounds of the estate, as well as in the drawing room, the cellar and the Landlord's room. Cast and crew were present there on August 11th and 12th, and again after the weekend on the 15th and 16th. The next several days -- August 17th to 19th and, following another pause for the weekend, the 22nd and 23rd -- were spent at Cefn Tilla Court in Llandenny. It offered the house's stairs, various landings, the kitchen, the hall, Bill's room and Pavel's room. In this footage, access to the tower was provided by a sliding bookcase, rather than a secret door hidden in a stone wall, as Bartlett had scripted.

A busy August 24th involved filming at several Cardiff locations. First up were the two rental options rejected by Bill and her friends: the house next to the factory was on Percy Street, while the tiny house was on Fairwater Grove West. Next, a residence on Fairwater Grove East was used as the exterior of Moira's home. The estate agency, Redcliffe Lettings, was represented by an actual realtor on Sneyd Street. Finally, Anderson began shooting material in the tower room at Roath Lock; this work continued through to the 26th. Various inserts were then taped in the studio on September 6th.

By early 2017, Moffat had decided that more emphasis should be placed on the mystery of the vault which the Doctor and Nardole were guarding at St Luke's. As a result, he wrote a new closing scene for Knock Knock, which was recorded at Roath Lock on February 22nd. To accommodate it, the story's original ending was dropped. It would have revealed that the old house had been restored after Eliza and the Landlord were consumed by the Dryads. The Doctor had manipulated the title deeds to take possession of the property -- much as he had done in Thin Ice -- which meant that Bill and her flatmates had a place to live after all. They quickly discovered that Eliza still lingered as a helpful if unseen presence within their new home. With this material cut, the mansion would now simply be shown to have been destroyed.

Sources
  • Doctor Who: The Complete History #86, 2018, “Story 268: Knock Knock”, edited by Mark Wright, Hachette Partworks Ltd.

Original Transmission
Date 6th May 2017
Time 7.21pm
Duration 44'29"
Viewers (more) 5.7m (21st)
· BBC1/HD
   7 days 5.7m
   28 days 6.2m
· iPlayer 958k
Appreciation 83%


Cast
The Doctor
Peter Capaldi (bio)
Nardole
Matt Lucas (bio)
Bill
Pearl Mackie (bio)
(more)
Landlord
David Suchet
Eliza
Mariah Gale
Shireen
Mandeep Dhillon
Harry
Colin Ryan
Paul
Ben Presley
Felicity
Alice Hewkin
Pavel
Bart Suavek
Estate Agent
Sam Benjamin
Young Landlord
Tate Pitchie-Cooper


Crew
Written by
Mike Bartlett (bio)
Directed by
Bill Anderson (bio)
(more)

Produced by
Nikki Wilson
Stunt Coordinator
Crispin Layfield
Stunt Performer
Karen Teoh
1st Assistant Director
Sarah Davies
2nd Assistant Director
James DeHaviland
3rd Assistant Director
Christopher J Thomas
Assistant Directors
Rhun Llewelyn
Lauren Pate
Unit Drivers
Sean Evans
Kyle Davies
Location Manager
Nicky James
Unit Manager
Beccy Jones
Production Manager
Adam Knopf
Production Coordinator
Sandra Cosfeld
Assistant Production Coordinator
Nicola Chance
Production Assistants
Virginia Bonet
Jamie Shaw
Assistant Accountant
Justine Wooff
Art Department Accountant
Alison Harvey
Script Supervisor
Nicki Coles
Script Executive
Lindsey Alford
Script Editor
Nick Lambon
Assistant Script Editor
Emma Genders
Camera Operator
Mark McQuoid
Focus Pullers
Jonathan Vidgen
Elhein De Wet
Camera Assistants
Gethin Williams
Drew Marsden
Dan Patounas
Grip
John Robinson
Assistant Grip
Sean Cronin
Sound Maintenance Engineers
Tam Shoring
Christopher Goding
Gaffer
Mark Hutchings
Best Boy
Andy Gardiner
Electricians
Gawain Nash
Gareth Sheldon
Bob Milton
Sion Davies
Supervising Art Director
Henry Jaworski
Art Director
Tim Overson
Standby Art Director
Nick Murray
Set Decorator
Adrian Anscombe
Production Buyer
Jen Saguaro
Prop Buyers
Jo Pearce
Charlotte Lailey de Ville
Draughtsperson
Kartik Nagar
Storyboard Artist
Mike Collins
Prop Master
Paul Smith
Props Chargehand
Kyle Belmont
Standby Props
Matt Ireland
Jonathan Barclay
Prop Hands
Scott Howe
Nigel Magni
Matt Watts
Storeman
Jamie Southcott
Concept Artist
Darren Fereday
Graphic Artist
Matt Clark
Graphics Assistant
Jack Bowes
Standby Carpenter
Paul Jones
Rigging
Shadow Scaffolding
Standby Rigger
Colin Toms
Practical Electricians
Callum Alexander
Austin Curtis
Props Driver
Gareth Fox
Construction Manager
Terry Horle
Construction Chargehand
Dean Tucker
Chargehand Carpenter
John Sinnott
Carpenters
Tim Burke
Matt Ferry
Chris Daniels
George Rees
Dan Berrow
Tom Berrow
Keith Richards
Campbell Fraser
Joe Painter
Alan Jones
Mike Venables
Construction Driver
Jonathan Tylke
Construction Labourer
Jason Tylke
Head Scenic Artist
Clive Clarke
Painters
Steve Nelms
John Nelms
Paul Murray
Debby McShane
Assistant Costume Designer
Zoe Howerska
Costume Supervisor
Kat Willis
Costume Assistants
Rebecca Cunningham
Leila Headon
Jenny Tindle
Make-up Supervisor
James Spinks
Make-up Artists
Megan Bowes
Lolly Goodship
Unit Medic
Glyn Evans
Casting Associate
Ri McDaid-Wren
Casting Assistant
Louis Constantine
Business Affairs Executive
Carol Griggs
Assistant Editors
Becky Trotman
David Davies
VFX Editor
Dan Rawlings
Post Production Coordinator
Hannah Jones
Dubbing Mixer
Mark Ferda
ADR Editor
Matthew Cox
Dialogue Editor
Darran Clement
Effects Editor
Harry Barnes
Foley Editor
Simon Clement
Foley Artist
Julie Ankerson
Titles
BBC Wales Graphics
Title Concept
Billy Hanshaw
Online Editors
Geraint Pari Huws
Mark Hardyman
Assistant Online Editor
Christine Kelly
Colourist
Gareth Spensley
Music Conducted & Orchestrated By
Alastair King
Music Mixed By
Jake Jackson
Music Recorded By
Gerry O'Riordan
Music Score Assistant
Jack Sugden
Original Theme Music
Ron Grainer
With Thanks to
National Orchestra of Wales
Casting Director
Andy Pryor CDG
Head of Production
Gordon Ronald
Production Executive
Tracie Simpson
Post Production Supervisor
Samantha Price
Production Accountant
Simon Wheeler
Sound Recordist
Deian Llŷr Humphreys
Costume Designer
Hayley Nebauer
Make-up Designer
Barbara Southcott
Music
Murray Gold
Visual Effects
Milk
BBC Wales VFX
Special Effects
Real SFX
Special Creature Effects & Prosthetics
Millennium FX
Editor
Adam Trotman
Production Designer
Michael Pickwoad
Director of Photography
Damian Bromley
Line Producer
Steffan Morris
Executive Producers
Steven Moffat (bio)
Brian Minchin

Updated 2nd March 2023